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I shoot videos and landscapes when I travel overseas. Obviously, I cannot shoot to a script or have much of a plan, since this is an unplanned vacation.
How would I construct a story from random scenes in Berlin, Warsaw, Vienna, Budapest, etc? Usually I end up with a string of shots without any story. This is not what you recommend in your book.
My friend Wendy will be travelling with me, but how could I include her in the video? Shots of her looking at the Danube from Buda and from Pest don’t seem to have much interest. Shooting
So, @SteveStockman I’m ready for a critique of one of my videos. I’m interested in ideas for improvement.
–Paul (Mr. Adventure) @bcoutdoor via twitter
Pretty video, Paul, and I can’t tell you how much I love being inside on a nice day writing about it instead of breathing fresh air and paddling across a lake. Okay, not that much.
The entire basis for my critique of this video can be found in the description you posted on YouTube. It’s very accurate, and as goes the description, so goes your video:
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